The bell rang at 3:05 and the class cheered and grabbed their bags and went. Two brothers 10 and 6 years old were doubling through the car park. They rode straight past the cars safely got to the end. And went .The brothers enjoyed riding through the car park so much they went again they decided.
As they rode a car was reversing the driver didn’t see anything the driver could only hear her children shouting and saying I want an ice-cream then crunch splatter blood was everywhere . A mother called the ambulance but it was too late.
When their parents heard they were devastated. They rushed to the hospital as they were getting closer and closer the beep noise was getting louder the mother had a sick feeling in her stomach she had a feeling that it was over……
BY: Maiya
The Deadly Car Park
Friday afterschool, it was as busy as a beehive. ( Every one walking around casually with friends.) Parent’s looking for their worried children. Parent’s wanting to go home. Car’s rushing around. It’s a busy summer’s day. People leaving with friends. hildren breaking rules. There were two boys heading home on a bike, totally calm and peaceful. (One of them is ten and the other is about seven.) The ten year old boy was riding his really cool B.M.X bike with flames, his seven year old brother was perched on the handlebars. The ten year old boy makes a deadly mistake and rides towards the car park.
By Sam I-W
After School in Car Park
It was 3:05 after sch13th March 2012ool there were kids running around parents picking up their kids on the busy car park. Along comes a kid on his bike with his little brother at the front. They were enjoying the ride but there was a car reversing. In that car there were kids shouting I want a ice cream, I want a drink, and the lady who was reversing couldn’t hear anything accept her kids shouting. The big brother saw the car reversing and said I’ll stop and go on the foot part but the brakes didn’t work. NEK MINUTE the bones were cracking the blood were everywhere the bike wheel rolled down the road.By Khem
Nek Minutes Story!!!
It was a winter’s day. The time was 3:05 and it was after school. Two boys were so excited because it was Friday afternoon. They were hurrying to get home and get warm. They ran quickly to get their bike. One boy didn’t have a bike so he jumped on to his friend’s bike. The two boys were biking faster and faster like the wind towards the car park. As they entered the car park they slid on the Ice. There was a car reversing back at the same time. In that car there was a kid screaming and asking for a lollipop and their mum couldn’t hear anything accept her kids screaming.
Nek Minute
CRUNCH
CRASH
CRACK!
The blood was splashing and the wheel rolled down the road…………
Written By Van Bawi!!!
After School In the car park
It was 3:05 people and kids rushing to get home. A kid and his brother were riding their bike in the crowded car park , a driver couldn't see them. Nek minute crash crunch and blood was all over the car tyres finale the driver stopped then she saw the bike. Because the popping sound of the tyres and the little boys guts could be heard over the sound of the screaming children. The car slid in the puddle of blood into and over the child’s legs.
By Robert
NEK MINUTE
It was 3:01 everyone is running out of class. Parents looking for their kids. Two boys where on there bike. One parent has got her kids so you know how they are now. It was a hot day at school and the two boys are really hot and tired biking up the grass hill so he took the fast way and so they went through the car park. The white car lights went on the car was reversing and the two boys did not see the car as it was reversing. The two boys where under the car, blood was rushing out of there body. You could hear them! The parents called 111 but they did not make it!!!
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